Good material. If you don't mind a suggestion, I would add a little something to that. A lot of unbelievers don't get the gist of the message when it is mentioned that Jesus was sacrificed for our sins. For the most part, other than hearing a few lines of scripture here and there, they haven't really read or studied the Bible. They don't realize that in the Old Testament times, that animals were sacrificed to pay for sin. Everything in this world has to be paid for in some way or another. When someone buys you a gift, they paid for it. Jesus bought us a gift, by being the sacrificial lamb for all of us, to pay for all of our sins. All sins in the past, in the present, and the future were paid for by Jesus being sacrificed. All we have to do is simply accept the free gift. Until the free gift is accepted, the debt has not been paid. Until the gift is accepted, it makes no difference on "how good of a person you are". Without Christ, regardless of how many good deeds you do, you will spend eternity with the same people that could do nothing but evil. It's not what you do to get into Heaven, but who you invite into your heart, submit to, and repent to.