I could use some input on this image, if you wouldn't mind helping me out. I want to be sure it communicates before I make it totally public. I'm open to critique and suggestions. Thanks.

What's your first impression about this image?
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What's your second impression?

paradigm

Just a new raytrace that I thought I'd share.

The Tower

(Made with POV-Ray)

I found this forum a few days ago and just signed up; this seemed like the right place to put a first post. Right now I'm in Missouri while going to seminary, and doing graphic design to help pay for it. I invite you to take a look at my portfolio site, and am obliged to any who would comment. Thanks.

http://www.tektonart.com/portfolio.htm